Coffee Shop Sessions

Comet

June 1, 2020

Stand by, enjoy the view

Keep a safe distance

Don’t let my fiery tail destroy you

Just a comet passing through

Hannah Faulkner says:

June 3, 2020 at 4:35 am

A great poem captured in so few words.

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Mark Ryan says:

June 4, 2020 at 9:09 pm

Concise and weight nice piece.
I like the style of your blog too, works well!

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- kimraypoet says:
  
  June 4, 2020 at 9:26 pm
  
  Thank you so much! 😊
  
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Geri Lawhon says:

July 21, 2020 at 10:38 am

I love the last line, it made me chuckle. Thank you for posting it.

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